It 's very boring to read this fanfic , honestly people are just enjoying it because they are bots or because it 's DxD , the MC is a doll being dictated by his system , the system itself is nothing much , the options do not make sense to exist since he does not have the power of choice, it will always be the obvious option, the rewards also do not value the mentioned proposals. It's frustrating how bad the author is writing after MC Haru's FanFic, fell absurdly after finishing MC Ichijou Yuuki's. Totally frustrated with these FanFic with mc with god complex. I'm only reading the fanfics because I hope the author writes something good someday.
akikan40
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LIKEEstá haciendo una reseña, en un lugar hecho para eso, si estuviera en cada párrafo haciendo una queja en lugar de dejar de leer, lo entendería, y todo lo que dijo es correcto, no fue exagerado ni nada por el estilo, y hubo tampoco hay comentarios insultantes.
DaoistiEL4jr:Voy a decirles esto si no te gustan las historias que hace no las leas las personas que hacen las historias se esfuerzan en hacer la historia interesante y bueno
RadicalHuman02:This type of garbage comments are the reason so much trash litters webnovel. You guys are always like "it's only for fun" and now we only get harem generic trash.
i have been an akikan fan for a........... surprisingly long time now that i think about it, i dont know how long exactly but it started from when he wrote his 'Starting as a mangaka' fanfic, back then i could tell by how good his jurassic fanfic was that this guy had potential and i was right........kinda. to be honest his development although repetative was steady and there werent any signs of decline and the like, well thats just my thoughts really. i dont know about you guys but i think his works started becoming just the same thing over and over again right after he finished his Sis-con fanfic, like he cant get out of a loop of some kind. there were indeed some instances where he started deviating from his usual route but it always stays the same at the end so yeah......... abit disappointed you know. i dont really have much to say other than those so bye i guess? (the weird fetishes were seriously annoying like i would have actually enjoyed it alot more without those especially the DISGUSTING NTR OLDER/OLD WOMEN FETISH THAT WAS JUST UGH!)
CamlEnvy:👍
DaoistlRderb:Brother, if you don't like it, don't read it, the jente who reads it is only to have fun not to look for a complex story, relax and if you want to read your cult works look for other works and no one will blame you anymore this is a work to pass the time it is not cerium please calm down
Harem is good if the girls have their plots for the MC to be involved with and the writer doesn’t forget their plot threads. I think harem’s main weakness is that most writers struggle with pacing and pacing the introduction of new characters and their relationship and personal stories can get very hard very quickly.
RadicalHuman02:This type of garbage comments are the reason so much trash litters webnovel. You guys are always like "it's only for fun" and now we only get harem generic trash.
midgetydeath:Harem is good if the girls have their plots for the MC to be involved with and the writer doesn’t forget their plot threads. I think harem’s main weakness is that most writers struggle with pacing and pacing the introduction of new characters and their relationship and personal stories can get very hard very quickly.
well for me even the siscon i have to left in chapter 800-900 because he forgot some relationships like the world of koro sensei, have weird interactions sometimes and later the power system and how the mc develpo them was bad in my opinion. Its true that wasnt a bad novel but its not to read more that 1k chapters