Review Detail of Plutonium in Arrancar
Review detail
I didn’t like it. Reason all people are foolish and lack common sense. Go kill if you are not satisfied, rape or fall in love Mc girl (it hasn’t happen but will happen in the future). Etc etc as if the whole world is after Mc and they all have a loose screw. And clinch Mc group are people full of creativity.
Arrancar
SakazukiKillsAce
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Thank you for your review. If you don't like it the it is alright, I'm sorry because I fail to reach a certain requirement for you to like my fanfiction. Sorry as this is my first time writing and also I do not really know how to properly portray a character that is why I just make it ******. Make all of them idiots. Again thank you for the review...
Look, I know many Novels have *fillers* character, and use them to develop Mc personality. But you are writing a short fanfiction with crossover so you don't have enough audience for that many chapter for Mc development. So yes your ideas of many mindless guys would 8/10 time fail.
SakazukiKillsAce:Thank you for your review. If you don't like it the it is alright, I'm sorry because I fail to reach a certain requirement for you to like my fanfiction. Sorry as this is my first time writing and also I do not really know how to properly portray a character that is why I just make it ******. Make all of them idiots. Again thank you for the review...
Plutonium:Look, I know many Novels have *fillers* character, and use them to develop Mc personality. But you are writing a short fanfiction with crossover so you don't have enough audience for that many chapter for Mc development. So yes your ideas of many mindless guys would 8/10 time fail.