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JunkieOverThe_Moon
JunkieOverThe_MoonLv55yrJunkieOverThe_Moon

So, heres the constructive criticism. I will he honest here It was a little hard to read the story becoz of the messed up words and sentences. Please switch to ur computer and write because mobile keyboard typing is very hard and inaccurate. Additionally plz give a line between dialogues The novel is definitely in my lib and I hope to read it afterwards when the mistakes r corrected and improved. Pl don't forget to review mine .......... Cya.

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StarsGrace
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Thank you for the constructive criticism! Now that I have moved over to my pc for writing this, when I can (more than likely tomorrow) I will be fixing the past chapters.

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StarsGrace
StarsGraceAuthorStarsGrace

What you have suggested was put to good use! A lot of the story was moved around and added a few things to it for a higher quality story. If you'd like you can reread some of it starting from chapter one and I'm sure you'll be pleasantly surprised at the change of quality, and thank you again for the constructive criticism.

5yr
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JunkieOverThe_Moon
JunkieOverThe_MoonLv5JunkieOverThe_Moon

No problem. I will do so immediately

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