The plot got me hooked because of the funny system. So far Ive read the two chapters. The grammar was good even tho its the first novel of the author. The development of the story is well build. Overall you can gave a time to read it because it was good even tho the chapters are too little. I will comeback again to edit my reviews when there is more chapter to get an info in the story. Good job Ms. Author.
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