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PlutoniumLv65yr
2019-07-19 19:51

I liked the concept of Omnitrix to Devil fruit power, but that’s it. Grammar is trash. Logic is trash. There is many unexplained questions that needs to be answered. My is over emotional, is too much childlike. It seems like a story written by a 12 year old in steroid, yea bad.

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