Review Detail of ElBiiii in The Villains Are After Me

As a reader, so far I can only give a highest point of 3 because it's still the beginning phases of the story. Grammar is okay. It's not very eloquent but could still give some feeling. The words used are not too shallow which is good. The story so far looks interesting but at the same time similar to others. I hope you could add your own twists as you go along the way. The World Background despite being not clear is alright because it's a transmigrating story. But it would be nice if we get to know his life and more of the system on the later chapters. Character Development... can't say for now. But I like the MC. Overall it's a good one. I look forward into reading more.