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LongLingTianKeith
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Read all "50" posted chapters, main issue is that the mc has literally has plenty of time to go further but doesnt, the author made him op but then nerfed him, made him follow his own path partially then changes it to follow the original. Honestly wish wouldve just had the mc continue his own path and not nerf himself or hold himself back since well ya gave him abilities which allows him to do both but dont. Love the story other than that, plot and ideas are good for the most part. And the writing quality is very well done.

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Douluo Dalu: Wulin's Legend (HIATUS)

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The_Wulin
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I'm not sure what the "50" posted chapters mean, but I also agree that the MC has plenty of time to do 'original' things but doesn't, because it is following the original plot. I am trying to break away from it and slowly move away from the original plot now, it just needs a bit more planning to execute while taking into account the original plot and how it would change by having different events happen.