Review Detail of Webnovel_Usernames in NPC Life

Writing Quality: 3/5 Reason: Just a few minor grammar mistakes, missing words, missing punctuation or overuse of punctuation. Nothing major to note. Stability of Updates: 5/5 Reason: The author is dedicated to his/her craft and has uploaded multiple updates in the past week. Story Development: 5/5 Reason: The story is progressing well, the first chapter was like a prologue chapter and introduced the main character's backstory somewhat well. Character Design: 3/5 Reason: The MC is a small and weak teenager. In the first chapter he is captured when he is 16 years old, gets sold to another country as a slave, and is sold and re-bought multiple times over the next two years due to his weak and small stature. The story opens up when he is approximately 18+ years old. No real big description on the main character yet. But this is good, because we don't see the mental flaws of the character yet. Most other stories have a lot of dumb MCs and that really throws their stories down the drain. World Background: 5/5 Reason: Place names have come up with ****** but good descriptions. The Author System has made its appearance once or twice and still has much room for improvement. Overall: 4.2/5 I'm looking forward to reading more of this story. I only have time to read one chapter a day, so I'll be looking forward to tomorrow to read the next chapter. Despite a few inconsistencies and a weak young ***** main character, I personally like stories where a weak character becomes stronger. Kind of like a coming-of-age but in this case since the MC is already an *****, it's going to be more of a maturing story? We'll see.