This novel has me hooked the story, characters, and world building sucked me in and I want more. On the other hand grammar is pretty bad I would recommend to use grammerly it's free and will automatically fix basic grammar problems. I cheat and use it on my English papers lol. Keep up the good work cant wait too see what happens next!!!
Evernightlord
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LIKEOmniigod thanks for your recommendation of Grammarly. But I cannot use it on my smartphone if you use want to use all the data you text will be collected by the company. The problems is I can't trust my data to the company behind grammatically due to my concerned related to personal data like password of my accounts etc. Hopefully from volume 3 all chapter are getting edited. which I am releasing daily by one of the readers,who is helping me. I don't know which chapter you are reading but we will try to get the later chapter edited also but I will take some time.