Good story. It has excellent dialogue and a likable MC. I enjoyed the twist on transmigration, where the MC driven by her past more than the future goal. The only thing, I would've liked more is the background. I feel like I know a lot about the MC, but very little of what's around her. This is more of an opinion on how I like my stories. Anyways good luck and keep writing.
WinterBud
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