Review Detail of DrPEPPER in Ryo the illusionist - Naruto fanfiction (Completed)

It is well written. But the author focuses most on emotional development rather than anything else, it depicts the darkness a single man had to endure throughout his life. Its a tragic story, but it is really well written if you ignore the fact that it's tragic throughout the story. Even the ending is simply made into a tragic emotional scene. There are few details that really vexes me, MC is never motivated, it jus feels like he lives one day at a time. He is so much op yet he misses so many obvious things. Then there is the separation between mc and his wife, which is simply stupid. This could have been so much more yet a few choices send it down the drain. The thing which really put me off is, nothing really changed, the op mc lived and he died, which is totally stupid considering how op he was. The author even called him 3rd god of shinobi.