Review Detail of Pavan1234 in Ryo the illusionist - Naruto fanfiction (Completed)

Good novel. Pros: 1. Different writing style (maybe bad for others, but it was like a breath of fresh air. 2. Story and ideas for progression are very good but is huge problem (read under cons) 3. Mc is designed cleverly and is a cool character. Cons: 1. This NOVEL has a BIG PROBLEM that is the power levels of Mc and other characters are not properly designed and are a ABSOLUTE MESS. AND THE MC IS TOO OVER POWERED TO HAVE AN ENDING LIKED THAT. (THE MC HAS THE TITLE GOD OF SHINOBI). Thanks for writing this fanfiction author(atleast 3/4 of novel is very good and last 1/4 of novel is something that I wish was never written)