Unfortunately, the writing style destroys the story. Every sentence is "he did this" or "he did that". It leaves no room for world building, for creating backdrop, for painting a picture. We are essentially reading a report on a character. He experiences emotionally disturbing events, but we as the readers are unable to feel a connection, given the lack of any detail. I like the idea of the MC. I like the time frame it takes place during. I like that it doesn't center on the manga's significant characters. There is too much left wanting with this story though.
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