Review Detail of outofspiritstones in Ryo the illusionist - Naruto fanfiction (Completed)

she does not have the kids with fugaku, they didn't even touch each other

eh? isn't itachi fugaku's son? sasuke was the one that's ryo's son

you didn't read the story and no they are not fugaku son not itachi not sasuke, this is not cuckolding story not ntr story and she definately isn't a slut

I'm gonna check back to you on that, gotta re-read the story to make sure (ugh... the feels), but it still doesn't change how useless ryo is, i guess if you're a fan of drama it would make an excelent story. but i don't know...i expect an OP main character that isn't in the original story to not just follow the original naruto plot especially when he's in love with a character that was destined to marry other people you know, it feels like a wasted potential Also i do read the story ( maybe i miss read something, again...gotta check back on that and i appologize if i did) ,but the way you put it is kinda offensive, you made it as if i put a review without reading the story, if ever i did that i don't deserve to be in this online community, my review is how i feel about a story AFTER READING IT Sorry for ranting, it doesn't feel good when you put a review and someone said "you don't read the story", it feels like my honest opinion on the story is something i came up with after reading only the synopsis, anyway those who read my review understand how the story will make you feel, it's good enough that drinking_water would say "you don't read the story" to me, but in my oppinion it's not for those who want badass MC, MC is OP but not badass enough

*Also i do read the story ( maybe i miss read something, again...gotta check back on that and i appologize if i did) ,but the way you put it is kinda offensive, Sorry!! didn't mean to be rude, again sorry

Sorry for misreading your story dude, will you have the heart to forgive this humble person who just want some good reading??? *puppy dog face So i have re-read the story, and yes the kids isn't fugaku's, but as it turns out you cant edit the review, or maybe it's because i'm using my phone? Anyway mikoto still married fugaku that doesn't change huh, the feels....!!!! I read your story twice!!! I'm so sad right now, drinking_water you sadist i hate you And i was right, NTR means cheating and cuckolding is a different thing (according to urban dictionary). when someone declare love to you and you began dating but suddenly you declared you're gonna marry other people it's cheating man, it's even more stressful because mikoto doesn't even want to cheat its all on the uchiha clans head Now i'm just depressed

Maybe using ntr word is abit too strong on a review? I mean people is getting wrong idea about the story Hear me out people The story is not a bad story, it's just not my cup of tea, the reason why i use the word ntr is because i feel that mikoto is cheating when she said she's marrying fugaku even tho she's at that time dating ryo, also as it turns out i miss read some part of the story, now that i know that itachi and sasuke isn't fugaku's son, i felt better, now am i gonna continue reading the story?... well... no the style of the MC doesn't fit my prefrence that's why i still rate the story a three star, not like a certain people who rated the story based on the prologue (yes i'm talking about you 1 star) Hope for the best for you drinking_water since this story is rank 22 i'm pretty sure lots of people are rooting for you keep up the good work, and this humble outofspiritstones is seeing himself out

read the story fully instead of skimming the storythat way you can see that the two children is Ryo's.

already finish this conversation with the author, already apologize as well

i was using my phone, so i can't edit my review, maybe if i use pc i could change it huh

nope still can't edit my review