Review Detail of XOMatsumaeohana in ♍y beautiful princess consort

Normally I don't post reviews unless there's 3-5 chapters, so take this review as more of an advice notice. Review Swap (Valid as of chapter 2) Writing Quality: Won't give stars out now since there's less than two chapters. Chapter 1--> to come like this . (get rid of the space so it becomes )--> to come like this. Start of a new sentence should be capital letters Chapter 1--> when he heard --> (W)hen he heard Since your talking about Prince make sure you use (P) not lower case p for Prince. Prince Xiao 👍 not prince xiao You could reword this sentence better, "As prince xiao was about to execute his plan suddenly lu che gave another envelope to the emperor saying this would answer all his questions " ---> (change) --> Prince Xiao abruptly decided to execute his plan, when Lu Che passed the Emperor another envelope. Lu Che explained, "This would answer all your questions." No need to capitalize IT. Chapter 1- IT was night time wen prince Xiao was walking (Change) --> Prince Xiao was walking alone, night already dawned the city. His thoughts distracted on how to how to eliminate the marriage. These are just suggestions on how to make your writing flow better than sound vague. Chapter 1-- ",yes "--( change) --> "Yes indeed, I want to.." For simple grammar mistakes like this you could use a writing software like grammarly to help you. You can @ me in the forums if you want more advice. Story Development: These are the types of novels I like to read so I'll definitely keep this in my library. Not much to say since the story just started. But the opening is interesting. Has the potential to be a good story. Character Design: Other than the Prince and Princess, the other characters aren't memorable yet 🤔 Even with the Prince it's the typical I need to escape this marriage somehow route. I hope the author develops this into something unique. His reason for wanting to escape the marriage 🤔 World Background: Still vague right now.