Review Detail of SinB in [HIATUS] I Hate Systems

Not bad! Let's just say it's quite different from the other novels, making it unique and interesting to read. Fresh vibe to it. There are a few grammatical errors throughout your writing, especially in chapter 2. Although negligible, you should probably still proof-read once more. You have a few uncapitalized letters at the start of a few quotes as well as some other non-semsical errors. Other than the few editorial errors, it's great and has a lot of potential! Wish you look as you continue to write.