Item: Fallen Hero System
Rating: 5
Author: WN_grdy_mthr_fker

WN_grdy_mthr_fkerLv116yr

2018-11-29 05:43

story is not too bad ...just not too many chapters to judge... hence need more chapter to determine whether a novel is good or bad.. but personally i like the novel just too little content, either increase the chapter length or do a mass release of 2 to 4 chapters at a time to reach the top.

Fallen Hero System

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