Review Detail of madara2as in The Sin of Pride in Another world=>[Dropped]

I like the story but I think that the writing is quite bad and preventing it from getting better at the ranking. I also think that until now, Eros never lost a battle or even got in a bad situation. What I want is for Eros to lose so he can learn and I also want him to fight the other sins, particularly, Pride, Wrath and greed. I think that they are the most interesting of all the sins.