Review Detail of HeartFlame in The Sin of Pride in Another world=>[Dropped]

I'm impressed that I've been able to read this far, I guess I quite liked the idea of Escanor power. How should I say... the writing is terrible even for me that doesn't have problems with bad grammar. The story is lackluster and cringe The MC tries to be Escanor but just come out as a cringe copycat most of my problem with the novel is actually the MC, the others are bad but are like junk food, the MC, however, is extremely painful to see, I recommend to the author actually see how Escanor acts, he doesn't act like he has self-confidence problems, you can see how he is confident in himself and he acts that way without being humble, but he's merely stating facts instead of being on being a paper soldier, everything he says is true and that's where his confidence comes from. The MC just seems like a **** with chunnibyou and problems with his self-esteem Again I liked the idea but the execution failed