Item: The Sin of Pride in Another world=>[Dropped]
Rating: 3
Author: AhmedAhmed

AhmedAhmedLv35yr

2019-04-21 20:35

if i was him i wouldn't choose for escanor i would choose for vegeta or broly or goku ....................... BUT most importantly i would choose for the most broken character THE LEGEND OF ALL ANIME THE STRONGEST UNSTOPPABE AND INVICIBLE THE MYTHICAL ANIME CHARACTER SAITAMA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The Sin of Pride in Another world=>[Dropped]

commander_pride_21

3.8

94 Chs

Liked by 1 people

Replies4

commander_pride_21Author

Well, I didn't know how to introduce how Eros got Escanor power so I created the wish plot. From the beginning, I was going for Sunshine and make it more OP.

5yr

AhmedAhmedLv3

well you're right escannor can pretty much destroy vegeta in the saiyan saga with over 100,00 power levels XDD and his power keeps increasing as the sun is longer.. so what's you're idea on you're upcoming novel and what universe? i would choose for dbz but its you opinion XD

commander_pride_21:Well, I didn't know how to introduce how Eros got Escanor power so I created the wish plot. From the beginning, I was going for Sunshine and make it more OP.

5yr

commander_pride_21Author

Well, this novel is still in the beginning. There still at least 2 other major arcs I think. Well, I planets at least till the.....Eh, I almost spoiled did dammit me and my mouth. For my next novel, it will be an original, I think.

AhmedAhmed:well you're right escannor can pretty much destroy vegeta in the saiyan saga with over 100,00 power levels XDD and his power keeps increasing as the sun is longer.. so what's you're idea on you're upcoming novel and what universe? i would choose for dbz but its you opinion XD

5yr

AhmedAhmedLv3

hmmm okay

commander_pride_21:Well, this novel is still in the beginning. There still at least 2 other major arcs I think. Well, I planets at least till the.....Eh, I almost spoiled did dammit me and my mouth. For my next novel, it will be an original, I think.

5yr

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