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SofaKingLv106yr
2018-11-22 00:25

There are so many plot holes, plot is **** , basically op mc fucks everyone and does whatever he wants. Grammar is terrible . Characters are basically the same, world backround wasnt explained

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Yeah my grammar is really terrible,i mean i could say it's not my main language but well it's still trash.For the plot holes i know that sometimes the plot can be quite...Shitty.The world background wasn't explained mainly because the first world was just used to introduce Tsarck and Sana.As for the characters indeed most are quite similar and even though there's actually a reason for that i think it's better if you discover it yourself.Thanks for the review even though it's not really positive,but atleast you explained what the problems were =)

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