Lost me on chapter 1. Many mistakes, chapter is literally the script from Beautiful CEO but with Naruto, and for some reason his rent in china is only 2 dollars usd. A bowl of his ramen probably cost more than that. Also why are you not calling Rose, Rose? Calling her, her real name is not going to change the fact you pretty much copy and pasted this chapter.
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LIKEI read a few reviews calling Naruto a pussy in this fanfic. Naruto grew up as an abused orphan during a war that he had fight and kill in. On top of that most likely being thousands of years ago. One of the last things this Naruto should be is a pussy. I think that a good Naruto would act like the one in "Ashikabi No Shinobi" by: The Engulfing Silence