The real story is to unique for you to have tried just to add Naruto and expected to be good. Naruto is a lil pussy everyone knows it and the main the dude is totally bad ass gives 2f about anyone so when you add Naruto it’s kind off like getting rid off Thanos in the avengers and putting Winnie the Pooh. It would of been nice if say you split it in 2 story and made your own main character in the first story and then in this one brought your Mc into this one as if he needed a break from all that happen kind off play and that way we would off been able to sort off know all his powers from the start and not have as many complains about it
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