Review Detail of mirajane79 in Naruto In The World of Beautiful CEO

I know, but I wrote this alone and clearly nothing I can offer to get an editor, I use browser's grammar check to fix several things but you can only get so much from the free version. My way to learn is actually by writing fic, so do tell which sentence confuse you, just one of them, or few of them if you have a spare time and willing. Thanks in the advance.

I started reading only yesterday and I don't have time to go back rereading other chapters so I will point out on the current chapter that I am reading. On the first paragraph of chapter 40, line 28 it should be "if 'you are' / 'you're' not capable to achieve.. " Second paragraph, "but I am turned 22 this years.." should be "but I turned 22 this year" or " I [(just) 'Just' is optional] turned twenty-two this year. Third para, " Naruto rose his hands.." Should be Naruto lift / lifted his hand to.. " 9th para last word should be 'silence' not silent. 11th para second line, "so... It's that mean there is another way.. " Should be "so... Does / do that mean there is... " 23rd para last words, "drifter" will be better to read it is replaced with "drifting" Well this is all I will say, I hope it helps you. I also do a understand that you are not from an English background, I don't mean to criticize you or anyone. I am a book lover and I read so many books and also from a literature background so when I read books or stories it becomes hard not to point out mistakes. And also I am a fan of Naruto been watching all the season since fifteen years back, so out of curiosity I started reading this fan fiction. All the best.