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Hmm after i read a few chapter (61 chapter lol) I can conclude -this is not naruto at all , i mean cmon naruto is not a smart character in first place dude, its more like you force him to look "smart" lol -grammar is decent its readable -story ? I think u should stop teasing your reader lol i dont know its ur strategy to make more people read your novel or what but its annoying tbh My final verdict is 3/5 , not bad but it could be better kappa
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Thank you, I appreciate your comment: 1. Actually Naruto is smart, even in the canon, he's creative and observant, I mean, the dude can accomplish something that his mentor and father couldn't do, if that's not smart then I don't know what else. In my story, Naruto had Kurama to teach him something and Danzo, his douche ex-honey pot, also, the shinobi world in my story is much darker than it already has in the canon. 2. My grammar is horrible 3. It's called suspense my brother, people in FF experienced it so I want people in WN too (FF because I have to write the next chapter, so the suspense is unavoidable... -_-)