Good so far! But author should take another road, dont copy like the real one... Make foundation between ruoxi first and be like happy family. Its piss me off u write like author not even eat ruoxi when she already like that. Then the story goes battle with first wife and many little wifes, if u want to go harem. Next battle between the cultivator or something big family. And make sure mc like Tang Xiu from Return from immortal world that keep cool and dominering, its the best mc for modern life for me. In the end its ur story dude, no one force u. Just hope u dont make like real author!!
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