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Gangsta1345
Gangsta1345Lv46yr
2018-11-27 05:00

Don t drop pliz... ...c.v.v.vv..vvnnvnvnnnvnnvnnvnv..........,.,.,.,.,.,,.,.,.,,.,.,.,.,. ...,.,.,,.,.,..,.,. . . Bbcbcjxjzdjfhhfjsjsjjcnngmvmg.f.v..b.b

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L1_a
4.1
31 Chs

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Rawr_Kitten
Rawr_KittenLv5

Not fleshed out massive amounts of typos and the mc is clearly not the sharpest tool in home depot... or menardes... or this planet... or any... 5 mins in and iv already crimged at the stupidity of it all

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Dorof
DorofLv5

Looked good but all this anime stuff and the horrible grammar ruined it for me. It is only my oppinion. Looked good but all this anime stuff and the horrible grammar ruined it for me. It is only my oppinion.Looked good but all this anime stuff and the horrible grammar ruined it for me. It is only my oppinion.Looked good but all this anime stuff and the horrible grammar ruined it for me. It is only my oppinion.

6yr
L1_a
L1_aAuthor

Hello people of all genders Thank you for reading my novel The release rate for the story is well unknown. You are welcome to leave any kind of idea you have that you want to be in the story in the comments or you can just review the novel for me to see.

6yr
Vighnesh_93
Vighnesh_93Lv10

There is no proper background development in this novel. It's like walking a path without a road or destination. The author has talent for writing but still has much to learn. Hope he catches up soon.

6yr
synncrytech3
synncrytech3Lv5

Seems intresting , ill read as long as there is a good release date (at least 1-2 chap per week) ..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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Heavenly_Rain
Heavenly_RainLv5

You need more detail, you know that you just say that she's the cutest. What I'm trying to say is how is she cute, does she have jade whit skin, dark black long hair or something like that

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giagene_
giagene_Lv11

This is an interesting story. There are some grammatical errors but it didn't stop me from reading this. There's alaways a room for improvement. I'm looking forward to the chapters you're going to release. Thank you for sharing this.

6yr
DRACONIAN619
DRACONIAN619Lv13

This is a really Great story.please don't ever drop the story. Don't punish the rest because of a few adolescents throwing a fit. So keep up th great work.

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Sin_of_Lust
Sin_of_LustLv12

Just want to rate I dont have anything to say 😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌

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Prince_Morningstar
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Its a good story and cool mc and cool abilities. And 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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