Review Detail of UnjustlyUnderpaid in A traveler that changes the world [IS BEING REWROTE!!!!]

It’s great so far, I’ve enjoyed seeing the details and intricacies that you’ve added, including stuff like baby voices. There are barely any grammatical errors and the updates are constant and stable thus far. The story is intriguing and I am actually looking forward to future updates. i still have some questions about the world the MC is living in but I’m guessing those will probably be answered in future chapters. Keep working hard and I’m sure you’ll do great. I do recommend whoever is reading this review to check the novel out and support the author. As for the author, the only Hong I want to say is good luck and have fun!