Review Detail of WinterBud in A traveler that changes the world [IS BEING REWROTE!!!!]

Gave this a solid four because the author clearly has a good idea of where she wants the story to go, and though the writing could use editing, it's something that would surely improve with practice. For now, I would recommend for the author to use/install Grammarly, just to help smoothen the storytelling :) Spoiler alert: the MC is reborn into a magic society as a baby. It's definitely a fresher take, so if you're interested, give the story a try!