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Review Detail of Reinesse in A traveler that changes the world [IS BEING REWROTE!!!!]

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it was overall good, but i suggest you stick to one type of narration or to one perspective. But I can see the potential of your story although there are only 11 short chapters.

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A traveler that changes the world [IS BEING REWROTE!!!!]

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