Review Detail of Dawsonrose in A traveler that changes the world [IS BEING REWROTE!!!!]

I like it a lot! It's surprisingly good! It felt fresh for my eyes to read a novel like this one here. I'd like to notify the author that there were some typos in some chaps but only minor ones! The plot is good and the author did a good job in describing the new world our characters are in. Overall, great job!! ❤ keep on updating!!