Review Detail of GAMING_IS_MUST in The path of the lustful demon

hmmm, how do I say this it's like a difference between experienced storyteller and a newbie, this one's a newbie where the story just seems like told by a robot, extremely monotonic, and lacks originality, the first 5 chapters are practically second rate copy of grasping evil. otherwise it's ok, I hope the author at least improves overtime