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GAMING_IS_MUST
GAMING_IS_MUSTLv143yr
2021-03-27 11:27

hmmm, how do I say this it's like a difference between experienced storyteller and a newbie, this one's a newbie where the story just seems like told by a robot, extremely monotonic, and lacks originality, the first 5 chapters are practically second rate copy of grasping evil. otherwise it's ok, I hope the author at least improves overtime

The path of the lustful demon

blue_cloud
4.6
269 Chs

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blue_cloud
blue_cloudAuthor

Hello this is the shameless author I hope you like this novel and give me your opinion about it. I was inspired by [grasping evil novel], so you may see some similarities between them in the beginning of the story but they will be different. Thank you all

6yr

Space_Fox
Space_FoxLv13

Probably one of the best Top tier cultivation novel I have ever read, to get a feel you need to read until chap 30 and you will get hooked 140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...

5yr
IcSnow
IcSnowLv4

I got to say didnt think it will turn out this good started with a similar beginning as Grasping Evil but the auther executed it a bit different as it goes on and it just get better and better kinda wish he tied more loose end with the girls he took but all in all a great store to read plot moves on there no full of fillers really enjoyable all i got to say is read it you wont regret it, only regret will be you cant donate any ss to the author which i say is very regrettable.

5yr
AndromedaAirlines
AndromedaAirlinesLv3

Truly a low effort writer. Countless misspellings, doesn't bother with correct grammar or formatting, steals from another story and doesn't even bother to do it well. Relationships are fake and based on mind control so there will not be any conflict. The fighting is ridiculous and nowhere near realistic. Chapter 11 had three "slapping" in a row, yet it was spelled as "salping" first, then "slapping" and then finally "salping" again. It perfectly shows just how little effort is being made. Basically a story where the author doesn't care, so why should you?

5yr
Kittrell
KittrellLv12

Just gotta say WOW. Burned through all the available chapters in a day and it was very enjoyable. The translation is a little dodgy here and there but not so bad it detracts from the reading. The dark revenge plot provided a thrilling feel and flowed well. The MC wasn't too overpowered and still showed challenges and showed character arc instead of him skating through the story like some god. The *** scenes (and there are many) are pretty racy but not overblown. The author could be a bit more descriptive(really my only major critic). Hope for faster releases..... pun intended and i would like to thank the author for the fun and lurid story.

5yr
Grimfire
GrimfireLv4

Author in case if you ever get this and you aren't dead, I just want to say I hate you very much. Why, why can't you just complete this book I don't care how it ends I just want to see the end. Damn you. It's a great book by the way and thanks for the effort.👍

4yr
FifthG0d
FifthG0dLv15

Any more updates? I love this book and really wanna keep reading. I hope it continues this is one of my favorites on the entire site.

5yr
furyxcrow
furyxcrowLv11

Still remember completing this book in just 2-3 days and yet no update since 11 months.. Try to update my man still waiting for that cliff and origin of MC...

4yr
shyfix291
shyfix291Lv5

i like this story.. .................. i hope author continue this story

5yr
Baneofthefallen
BaneofthefallenLv4

NC story i like this just don't make the protagonist mass murderer and hypocrite And don't make all of his harem members As cauldron plz update regularly

5yr
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