Review Detail of GreasyBeer in The Harukian Chronicler

Obviously there isn't much to say since there are just three chapters as of now. I like cynical characters so I like the mc so far. (He seems like one) There are a few typos that the author can find easily with reading it one more time but other than that the grammar is perfect. Only complain I have is the length of the paragraphs. It's not really wrong to have long ones but they are hard to read on mobile. Tldr; Give it a chance.