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Review Detail of Javeron in Adventures in My Hero Academia

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Whole this story is good, but I am somewhat less comfortable with the dialogue in your story because less specific who's talking, the MC or another character. And i have a message for you author, don't carelessly drop this novel

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Oh okay I'll try to fix the dialogue a bit then