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Review Detail of katorishi in Adventures in My Hero Academia

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if you're going to make this ultra difficult one make it very apparent how weak the protagonist is from the very beginning two make good reason why so many geniuses are born in this era like some cosmic force or something like one for all and all might were part of the (some war name ) and this war sent huge waves of energy so that baby's born in this era have huge power and quirks were more rare than in the past (all for one era) and this is why poeple are getting stronger , two you're going to need more power than quirks like magic and phisical stuff i think drugs that there are drugs out there that help break the limit and inner force or chi and united world but these things are new and expensive to do unless you are rich and omni genies that have talent for all 3 ( qi/ki ,magic and quirk ) are rare not only that do not forget sceince and resaerch and draw insperation from hunter x hunter ther will be plenty of people with weird quirks a power that knows your history a power that seein the past all tipes of powers and make quirkless racism a thing like one organisation that kills quirkless and another that is a dangerous anti radical belief that quirks are evil , and do not only do those 3 energy's like soul power divine power star power cosmic power even weird metals and like i said earlier technology inter-dimensional you can even haki genie's like dragon ball bloodlines devil fruit zanpakuto aura(rwby) Djinn and make ther different schools of magic like magi magic marvel magic dc magic don't limit your writing to just quirks and there are plenty of jobs you can get insperation from like and not limited to warlocks blacksmith summoner wizard reaper ranger tank cook alchemist , you should also steal like and not limited to danny phantom one peice naruto marvel dc rwby bleach Magi: The Labyrinth of Magic Ps. don;t try to mix Chinese and Japanese work in fanfic this does not work well take it from a lurker american and Japanese can mix but never Chinese and Japanese bad guy's organization hydara 2 i mentioned earlier and those two could be used lot far all forms ,of power evil magic gods evil magic organization Al-Thamen hallows and one last piece of advice destroy the original plot because the best fanfic use the source material and make their own story from that this is katorishi **. 5 stars for support

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