Review Detail of MilordInk in My Flower, My Muse

Note: The writer's first language isn't English. First time trying to write. If you can't overlook the grammatical mistakes, then this isn't for you. Otherwise, it has potential, and the characters aren't half baked. I recommend anyone who can look past the grammar, and see the story underneath to give it a whirl, and help the author improve, because she's learning! That's all I have to say, milord signing out!