Item: Hold My Hand, Don't Let Me Go
Rating: 4.8
Author: AfifahBasir_

AfifahBasir_Lv125yr

2020-01-24 14:01

I cry too much. I mean if a novel could make my eyes puffy it means it's a good story. Please please please keep on writing. It's really a good story. I'll be waiting for the next update. Keep on the good work! Fighting! 🙆🏻‍♀️🙆🏻‍♀️🙆🏻‍♀️💕💕💕🙆🏻‍♀️🙆🏻‍♀️🙆🏻‍♀️🙆🏻‍♀️🙆🏻‍♀️

Hold My Hand, Don't Let Me Go

starandsugar

4.6

3 Chs

Liked by 4 people

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starandsugarAuthor

Hi! I'm working on it right now. Thank you so much for liking this story. These kind of comments are one of the reasons why I'm not dropping this. ILY

5yr

AfifahBasir_Lv12

😘😘😘😘😆😆😆😆😆😆🙆🏻‍♀️❤

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I fell in love with this book! It tugs your heart strings and keeps you begging for more. I am excited to see the how the plot unfolds and see more development between the characters. This is a good transmigration story in modern times and the writing quality is decent than most novels. I hope that the updates and the chapter length becomes stable and consistent, as the novel becomes secured. Overall this is a good read, so don't miss out on it! :)

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It's been a while since your last update but still you never fail us cause it quite worth the wait😊😊 I hope you can give much of your time writing this incredible story of yours☺️☺️ GodBless hope this message will motivate you to continue working on this☺️☺️☺️☺️ KUDOS for the next chapter😍😍🥰🥰

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I'm in love with this. arrgghh, I just hope that it updates more frequently. The story is so good and it gives you a new look on antagonist. I love it so much. I love all the characters. Author please make a new male lead. Please please please

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