Review Detail of CrispyNoodle in Conquering the Multiverse With My Summoned Harems

Author here shamelessly rating my own work :3 It's not because I think I wrote the perfect story or something this is just so its easier to pop up on people's radar. I need readers to help me correct my mistakes so i can gain experience. ***this needs a preview function for posting chapters. seriously what i wrote did not show up like I thought it would when I publish, foolish QI***