Review Detail of GabrielDetchans in Dragon Breaks The Void

A very good cultivation story with a lot of potential! Good work Author! It is action-packed and has some funny jokes at the right time to defuse the *******. The world background seem solid enough and the story development is coming around nicely. The main characters design is very good. The secondary characters could use a little tweaking. The narrative is compelling and the writing quality is above average for this site. There are some minor spelling and grammar errors thar are easy to fix with some edition. The lowest point is the stability of updates; author really should update more often. Overall, a great cultivation novel from a beginner author! Give it a try!