Review Detail of woofhart in Princess of the Swords

Hi, author here. don't mind my own ratings because you know... it doesn't really count. This is my very first novel so I wanted to make this as straightforward and yet as comprehensive as possible. Webnovel tagged my novel as an Original so I wanted to really make this as original as can be. I tried to ward off influences from the hundreds of novels that I read, but I don't really know if I can. But anyway, I'm trying to make something new and different... or at least, the things I saw lacking in other novels, I want to put it here. Which, I still don't know yet whatever that is. But anyway, if you have better ideas than me, please feel free to share. I'll give you a candy or a virtual hug for every contribution you make. Lets make this work and please enjoy the journey to a thousand chapters. Thanks a bunch!