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while the story is great it seems a extremely rushed to have him kill a noble (who normally would never appear anywhere far from where they live simply due to how many enemies they have and their own disdain for common people) so soon while he is so weak (and young since he not only does not have a ship he does not know how to sail nor is he ready to adventure on the sea yet since his combat ability is only around elite soldier (current location) common soldier (grandline) ...due to this i will be dropping this story since i can only see a cliche plot of running being hunted and running some more where he has a massive bounty on his head and even being hunted by any and every wannabe bounty hunter and marine that is in the area he is at...while the mixture of magi was done well and was an enjoyable twist but the combat leave much cringing shouting out skill names when it really is not needed lets everyone know you are attacking with some unique move and no matter how dumb a marine is when guarding a noble most of them would be grandline marines so even the common ones would be as strong as him(most elites even knowing how to utilize shave) and would react to his shout not stand their like fools since the elites would be the ones closest to that noble with at least a rear admiral being a few steps from the noble thus killing the noble at his current power would not be possible after all observation haki users are a must when guarding someone important let alone a noble.
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Thanks for the review.. And from it I could see that you haven't read most of chapters... It was repeatedly mentioned that he has mastered all three types of Haki and his current battle strength is around Vice Admiral which for your information is above that of Rear Admiral.. As for why a Noble was there.. I suggest you to read the Manga or Anime cuz it was mentioned they do sail the seas occasionally.. So that they can purchase slaves.. If you want me to write it out for you it's cuz Boa sisters where on the island... They where his slaves and he is after them.. And if ur a pirate isn't it normal to be hunted by the Marines.. As for him shouting out the name of techniques.. It isn't for the Marines or the people in the story its for the readers.. So that they can know wtf is going on.. So tell me if you have watched op and if someone of luffy's strength (post time skip) uses something like 5th Gate of the inner gates (Naruto) will he be able to surprise an unexpected marine.. Anyway thanks so for reading till here.. 🤷🏻♂️✌️
even if he mastered all 3 haki he has no real combat experience with only spars against his dad and hunting some wild mutated animals ..so when you factor in his body size and experience he can only be considered around a early rear admiral in power but any (grandline) elite marine would be able to beat him as their training, techniques ,and experiences would more then match up to his current level due to all that he lacks so long as they are smart enough or work together (since marines rarely ever fight alone against pirates)... as for readers having him think it would be more then enough..(as to surprising unexpected marines when he had already attacked them for going after the girls they would be on guard no matter how dumb they are since they would know someone wanted to save those kids thus would be watching the crowd with a larger encirclement to ensure the noble and 'cargo' would be safe until they are a far distance from land then just being on the look out for ships or water walkers)
Enryuu_Zahard:Thanks for the review.. And from it I could see that you haven't read most of chapters... It was repeatedly mentioned that he has mastered all three types of Haki and his current battle strength is around Vice Admiral which for your information is above that of Rear Admiral.. As for why a Noble was there.. I suggest you to read the Manga or Anime cuz it was mentioned they do sail the seas occasionally.. So that they can purchase slaves.. If you want me to write it out for you it's cuz Boa sisters where on the island... They where his slaves and he is after them.. And if ur a pirate isn't it normal to be hunted by the Marines.. As for him shouting out the name of techniques.. It isn't for the Marines or the people in the story its for the readers.. So that they can know wtf is going on.. So tell me if you have watched op and if someone of luffy's strength (post time skip) uses something like 5th Gate of the inner gates (Naruto) will he be able to surprise an unexpected marine.. Anyway thanks so for reading till here.. 🤷🏻♂️✌️