Review Detail of averagereaderman in Dancing of the Flame

Writing Quality: Overall, it’s pretty good but you need to press Enter more!! It feels like one big paragraph and it’s pretty hard to read. Stability of Updates: They basically posted all their chapters in a single go (I think) so I’m just going to leave it at a 3 and wait until a few days pass by. Story Development: So far its only been flashbacks besides 1 chapter so I’m going to leave it at a 3. Character Design: I’m going to leave it at a 4 because it seems like the characters are going to be developed further into real.. characters. Their intentions are relatively unclear aside from Juliana, who may have other reasons as to why she broke up with Romero.. World Background: 3, there probably isn’t going to be much world development in a love story like this, but I don’t want to give it a 0 because it has almost none — it’s a classic love novel, not the MC taking over the world. Overall Rating 3.2 MTA (Message to Author): You have a pretty decent story going, I’ve never really read romance but it’s kept me a little hooked. Now is the chance to set yourself apart from other romance novels. You have something that not a lot of other “CEO, kiss me!” novels can say they have. 2 people who seem to have relatively normal backgrounds fall into heartbreak as neither one tries to get back together. I’d suggest now you find some unique way to get them back together.