Review Detail of Hahahshhs in Choices system

Hi guys, I’m writing between 1 and 2 chapters a day, I’m a student at university and I have a part time job on the side so I can’t do anymore. Anyway if you could drop by and leave me a review, good or bad as long as it’s constructive I’ll take it and try to become better using your advices. You can also comment on the chapters I do my best to answer every one of them.