This story is progressing nicely with all the intriguing developments of Yao Ying and Yao Ling. The two main protagonists’ characters are written well although I find that the author made Yao Ying into a man who’s too fixated on *** and is overly jealous. There’s a time and place for acts of love, yet he’s constantly finding ways to ‘eat tofu’ from his wife. If I’m Yao Ling, I’ll probably be so stressed and upset to be just taken for *** object. I hope that this mission will give the readers more actions and less of Yao Ying’s clumsy attempts to seduce his wife. I often skipped chapters of Yao Ying’s lascivious acts of seducing Yao Ling and move on to the story itself.
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