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This novel is quite good if you think in the positive way as the storyline is good and all with some reincarnation benefits BUT there is so much stupid f@$&ing **** that messed everything like MC talking with his partner then flashback for a very insignificant reason for a chapter or two . There is also the problem with POV ( don’t get me wrong , I like some of it ) I can’t tell who is talking all the time as everyone the author describes the person with “I” . Thirdly, the story is inconsistent with previous chapter ( unless I’m blind and can’t understand it ) like the part where they were fighting the blood something wolf BOSS in the forest while talking about real life creature in NOIM then the damn flashbacks happen again and by the time the flashbacks ended the story were no longer fighting the wolf in the game but the heroine ? Fighting some other monster or talking with the captain in the city which not related to the storyline in the fighting scene or is the scen after the fight but I’m not sure about that . Anyway I like the plot line and hope the author to fix these minor issues like adding “ William POV “ , “ Yesterday or an hour ago or 20##.3.6 “ , he title of the chapter should change according like side story 1,2,3 or Edizon ‘s POV during the battle and so . Thx