It started pretty good, but it did go down so fast, I mean come on mate, you're practically totally destroyed the balance of your OC. You are practically merging all strong species out there, and come on man, power lever x 24000? are you for real? You are practically insulting the original franchise. I mean yeah, it's your fanfiction, but at least make it in the limits of the universe the story is playing in.
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