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Review Detail of Erinyes in World God Empress

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Erinyes
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Writing Quality: Not so hot. Quite a few mistakes but readable. Stability: Good. Story Development: Bad. She's pretty much had ZERO hardships and pretty much begins to surpass everyone. The power gain is just... just stupid. Character Design: Pretty bland because of story progressing really quickly. World background: Lacking but has the potential to get better. Overall, the MC is obviously modeled off of Fairy Tail's Erza which honestly leaves a bad taste. She's young but acts much older and yes, we can attribute some to Samsara but still... there's none of the struggles that one would expect a child to have upon having the info. The characters are not really elaborated on. Needs balance and more thought. It's okay but is definitely lacking. Hopefully author reflects on his work AND reads the work of other good novels to get insights on writing styles, plot progression, and character development.

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