The writing style is clean. Nothing too complicated but there are some minor errors. It is too early to determine the stability of update. I'm giving you the benefit of the doubt. Maybe you can try to edit the synopsis a little. And At the moment, the synopsis feels more like an excerpt usually found in the first chapter. Perhaps it is because the story is still at a very early stage, but I find it hard to connect with Ezra.
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