Review Detail of Mud_Man in My rebirth is a bit wrong

Thank you =), for the chapter I want to create a solid foundation. I need to sleep for playing my book in my dreams so I make 1 or 2 chapter per day. The books start in Egypt between Sambyses II and Darius I reign like 524 Before JC with the mysterious disappearance of 50 000 army of king cambyses. Appreciate for your comment and review =) Have a good day.